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[graculus]

And while I'm always a little self-conscious about writing sex scenes, since I know that what works for me won't necessarily work for everyone reading it, I came across this descriptive gem somewhere in my travels and felt I ought to share it with everyone on my friends list who writes:

"Their slippery cocks were like two river otters, sliding over and under one another, muscles flexing in play."

Yes, that's going on the list for the 2006 connotations panel. ;)

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[graculus.livejournal.com]

Many of the descriptions of genitalia make me wonder, like louiselux, if these people have actually ever seen someone naked...