It was a good story, but the premise was terribly flawed by a factual error.
And that's always galling. Because essentially if you have to pummel or amputate reality (however reality works in that universe) in order to make your story viable, then maybe you're working a little too hard?
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carisma_sensei
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Date: 2005-07-10 09:01 am (UTC)*cough*
It was a good story, but the premise was terribly flawed by a factual error.
And that's always galling. Because essentially if you have to pummel or amputate reality (however reality works in that universe) in order to make your story viable, then maybe you're working a little too hard?